A wonderful sketch yet again. Advanced critique? Uhmm I'm not really good at giving one though but here goes.

I like her pose and her expression very much. The way she's holding her right arm up seems to show that she's shielding her eyes from something very bright, hence the long lines on the left portion of her body which conveys that those are shadows (gosh wait-a-go state the obvious). I think, to put in more depth and contrast is to put more shadows. I don't know, I'm not really good at giving critiques. I'm so sorry. But even without that, this is really very good.

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Nice sketch indeed! XD

really great job on the the hatchings and cross-hatchings

great job!!

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Nice!! ^_^

That's so pretty~! I really do wish I could become good as you~ Your art is so wonderful. I have a long ways to go, to be where you're at.

soo pretty! XD

u should post more!!

lovely could you be may teacher please!

thank you

No, don't be sorry. Your comments help me a lot. And i appreciate them very much, so please stop feeling sorry ok.

And this time you are right too, i really should darken some area to create stronger contrast to give more depths. It really should be carefully done or it will really screwed the whole thing. I will try to be more daring when shading my arts starting from now.

Thank you for your comment . You are good at commenting and people including me really appreciate them.